The Pros of Zoos speech

So I did my second speech on zoos. This one was about the good things of zoos and i'm actually for zoos rather than against them. I thought I did pretty good. I've noticed that i've been getting better at doing speeches since i've been in this class, so it's really helping. Of course, I did make some mistakes. I had a few flubs, like when I was listing off the things that zoos do. I said 'They conserve, protect, research, rescue, educate, and conserve." Later, I realized that I said conserve twice, so I had a laugh about that. I was nervous, so my words didn't flow as well as I wanted, but I did better at saying where I got my information, I thought. I did better at this speech than my last speech. I thought I spoke louder and faced the audience more. I rememberd to say my sources too. I made more eyecontact than my last speech, I think, but I still was pretty dependent on the power point. Overall, I thought I did a fair job, but there are still things I need to work on. I plan to work better on memorizing more of my speech next time so I can focus on the audience more.

What could i have done better?

I thought I did a decent job on my persuasive speech about the cons of zoos, but their were a few things I think i could have done better. I think i should have spoken louder because i noticed some of my words were lost when i turned away from the camera. I think i could have made more eye-contact too. But the voice was the main thing.